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See your message the way a hiring manager does
10 teardowns: the message that gets ignored, the work-first version, what the reader sees in 10 seconds, and the one-line fix. Five job applications, five sales prospects.
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What's inside
- SDR at a SaaS company: the Loom teardown. Stop describing your skills and record yourself using them on their buyer.
- AE at a marketing agency: the one-page account plan. If you want a closing job, show the plan you'd use to close one account.
- Closer for a coaching business: the recorded mock call. For a closing role, the call is the proof, so record one and send it.
- BDR at a fintech: three cold emails for their product. Write the emails they'd pay you to write, before they hire you.
- Account manager at a DTC brand: the stockist check-in. Show how you'd look after three of their real accounts.
- Selling to a local gym: the mock trial page. Show the owner their own business working better, on one page they can open on their phone.
- Selling to a DTC skincare founder: the product page rewrite. Rewrite their most important page in their customers' own words, side by side with the original.
- Selling to a restaurant group: the private events page. Find the gap a busy operator already knows about and fill it with something usable this week.
- Selling to a SaaS head of marketing: the onboarding email rewrite. Become their customer for a week, then show them what their customer saw.
- Selling to a real-estate team: the listing rewrite and video script. Pick one live listing and show the agent the exact content you'd make for it.
Who it's for
You're applying or prospecting and want to know what the person reading checks before they reply. Every teardown ends with a "your turn" prompt so you build your own version the same day.
The companies are made up. The patterns are the ones hiring managers and founders really see. Included free in every full Proof First plan.